I loved the storyline and the animation but the dialogue and monotone voice acting was taking me out of the story and killin' me. Besides that it was great!
I like the style
the story and animation is good but one thing it desperately needs is a preloader! I was at school watching this and it kept pausing because it wasn't loaded yet!
But one major continuity error i found was that Zoe suddenly had an eye patch!!! Where did that come from??? Anyways I've followed the series from the beginning and am planning on donating some money so you stick around! Keep it up man!
Hey just because you are 14 doesn't mean you have an excuse to submit a flash that you obviously know isn't that good having said to not blam it. Saying that you get a low score from me cuz if you really try I bet you can turn out some nice stuff so here's my nudge to make you care enough to actually try! Better luck next time man...
I've edited the submission info so plz don't go on about it anymore. Thanx for reviewing though!! :)
Not something usually found on NG but still a good job. The music fit well and the message was clear and to the point. Keep it up!
Not bad but why the heck did you use 30 FPS?!? I mean even at 15 fps is still more then enough! Also how did you do the sky like that?? Anyways, even though I didn't understand it... that was nice! Keep it up man!
thanks for the good review!! I used 30 fps to challenge myself to be able to make a longish movie with that many fps.
Oh man that was good!
I loved it! It had the perfect graphics for Mario and I couldn't stop laughing!! Doing the last part to Bohemian Rhapsody was like putting the cherry on a sundae! You make Nintendo proud! Hope to see many more like this!!
I really got a kick outta watching this considering I used to be a comic book store clerk. Great timing of the action to the flash! Keep it up man!
All Around Nice Flash
I loved how he threw people toward and away from the camera, that was an awesome effect. It was up to speed for stick movies and the music worked very well. The heads weren't always filled out right but that was a little thing. I really liked how you pronounced his grabbing the gun out of the air, then pausing and shooting the guys head. Well done, I look forward to your next sub.
The graphics were pro quality but that was a really messed up storyline. I don't know about everyone else but that deffinatly didn't go at all the way I expected it too. I thought it was a little low and immature in humor standards and I'm in college so try and work on your storylines a little more. That's all from me.
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